You've made some really good improvements. I think the top one fits more with the personality of the other side. I think you need to go with a bolder weight for "SAM BOSMA" though; it's losing its authority being that thin. I think it'll be a-ok if you make that change.
You tricked me with your non-existent webshite. I went there expecting grand things.This card is legible and attractive. It's less unique than your previous (type crazy) design, but it's very agreeable nonetheless.Sam Bosma is a really good name. Congratulations on that.