Hello. Thank you for your comments on that last post, they have been very helpful. I am continuing to work on this potential business card, so if you've got more suggestions, throw them at me! It doesn't take long at all to edit this, so any little thing. Here is the updated version with the magic wand, which was my favorite in the first place.
I darkened the wand so it's more easily readable against the dark background, and I've changed the band on his hat to match it. It is getting closer to correct.
Also, I thought that a bowler hat would have gone nicely with a switchblade. Just checking.
I am also working on the back of the card. I am working with two versions, one that is simple and one that is crammed with text, just like this blog. Here is the latter. I am working on positioning the necessary text in an interesting way. I don't think I have it right yet. I am still trying.
And the former.
As you can see, I list www.sbosma.com. This has been registered, and is being considered. Thank you for your time.